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Friday 8 September 2017

My Ted


In class we were writing about special things that were important to us.

2 comments:

  1. Hi Sam, you are doing well at painting a picture for the reader. I like the simple way you are illustrating your posts.

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  2. Hi Sam, I like the part where you told me he was cuddly and soft. good job. from Kaleb

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