HI Samantha, it's Lara, I like your poem about if I were a housing crisis. I especially like the ending on how the government would step in and help the people and while you would plot payback.Great Job! bye, Lara
hi Sam Grace here i loved how you use how you would force people to live on the streets or cars or emergency houses maybe next time instead of emergency houses because those are for a storm on a housing crisis maybe you could changed the emergency house to something ealse
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HI Samantha,
ReplyDeleteit's Lara, I like your poem about if I were a housing crisis. I especially like the ending on how the government would step in and help the people and while you would plot payback.Great Job!
bye,
Lara
hi Sam Grace here i loved how you use how you would force people to live on the streets or cars or emergency houses maybe next time instead of emergency houses because those are for a storm on a housing crisis maybe you could changed the emergency house to something ealse
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