This week for writing we wrote about an animal of our choosing. I choose Rabbits because they're one of my favourite animals. I hope you learn something from my information report.
Kia ora. I am Talei from St Mary’s School. I really liked how you set it out and how you use very clear words. I learnt that Rabbits can be found in South Africa. Maybe you could make the words bigger on the slides. Please visit my blog here
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Kia ora. I am Talei from St Mary’s School.
ReplyDeleteI really liked how you set it out and how you use very clear words.
I learnt that Rabbits can be found in South Africa.
Maybe you could make the words bigger on the slides.
Please visit my blog
here
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Talei