Firework is explosive and beautiful
She dyes her hair rainbow it is long and silky
She can be really loud or super quite
Rainbows, stars and people are her favourite things because they are amazing like her.
Water and Swimming frighten firework and she wants to run away
to people who will watch her put on a show.
This is my writing for this week. The theme was Guy Fawkes so I decided to do
personification writing.
personification writing.
Kia Ora Samantha,
ReplyDeleteThis piece of writing is really good! I think that if fireworks was a person, this would definitely be the best way to describe them. Good job!
Have a good day,
Tara
Hi,
ReplyDeleteThis writing is really good! I think you could be a author won day if you tried hard enough.
From Charlotte.