Well done for completing this SLJ activity, 'Crazy, Cool Clouds' and for telling us what this cloud reminded you of. I really like your theory of it possibly being a tornado sweeping over a town, terrorising young children and animals— a very cool and vivid suggestion for your readers! How do you think this amazing cloud was formed?
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Tēnā koe Sam!
ReplyDeleteWell done for completing this SLJ activity, 'Crazy, Cool Clouds' and for telling us what this cloud reminded you of. I really like your theory of it possibly being a tornado sweeping over a town, terrorising young children and animals— a very cool and vivid suggestion for your readers!
How do you think this amazing cloud was formed?
I look forward to your response!
Cheers,
Jordan