Well done for completing this SLJ activity, 'A Flying Fox' and for telling us how you would feel if you had the opportunity to go ziplining in Rotorua. I appreciate all of the descriptive words that you've used in these few sentences, including 'nervous', 'courage', 'crazy' and 'exhausted'. Maybe next time you could add images or colour to these posts to help them stand out :)
I look forward to seeing your other blog entries! Thanks,
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Kia Ora Sam!
ReplyDeleteWell done for completing this SLJ activity, 'A Flying Fox' and for telling us how you would feel if you had the opportunity to go ziplining in Rotorua. I appreciate all of the descriptive words that you've used in these few sentences, including 'nervous', 'courage', 'crazy' and 'exhausted'. Maybe next time you could add images or colour to these posts to help them stand out :)
I look forward to seeing your other blog entries!
Thanks,
Jordan