Well done for creating this acrostic poem for the activity, 'The Southern Lights' — I appreciate how you've created an image of you viewing The Southern Lights with your whānau, and can see that this would indeed make everyone a bit sleepy from having to stay up so late to view it. Don't forget to introduce the activity so that your readers know why you've chosen to write this beautiful little poem.
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Kia Ora Sam!
ReplyDeleteWell done for creating this acrostic poem for the activity, 'The Southern Lights' — I appreciate how you've created an image of you viewing The Southern Lights with your whānau, and can see that this would indeed make everyone a bit sleepy from having to stay up so late to view it. Don't forget to introduce the activity so that your readers know why you've chosen to write this beautiful little poem.
Cheers,
Jordan