Awesome work completing another SLJ activity! — Wow, your hotel looks awesome! Thanks for bringing it to life by drawing a picture. Using materials such as red bricks and tiles are a great choice! I see you have the top floor room, you must have a great view of Mission Bay. Can you tell me more details about your hotel? Does your hotel have a name? And, what is it about Mission Bay that you like so much?
Looking forward to reading more of your blog entries.
Hi Samantha I really like how you made your self kind of poking out the window I thought it was really creative and I like how you told us what color and material Next time you could make a background of mission bay so it will look really realistic
Hi Mehakpreet, Thanks for the feedback, I will differently add a background next time. Great job on completing the Summer Learning Journey, do you think you'll win?
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Hey Samantha,
ReplyDeleteAwesome work completing another SLJ activity! — Wow, your hotel looks awesome!
Thanks for bringing it to life by drawing a picture. Using materials such as red bricks and tiles are a great choice! I see you have the top floor room, you must have a great view of Mission Bay. Can you tell me more details about your hotel? Does your hotel have a name? And, what is it about Mission Bay that you like so much?
Looking forward to reading more of your blog entries.
Thanks,
Jordan
Hi Jordan,
ReplyDeleteI love having people comment on my work! I will add a name next time. I love mission bay because I love the beach and swimming.
Sam
Hi Samantha
ReplyDeleteI really like how you made your self kind of poking out the window I thought it was really creative and I like how you told us what color and material
Next time you could make a background of mission bay so it will look really realistic
Keep up the good blogging
Mehakpreet
Hi Mehakpreet,
ReplyDeleteThanks for the feedback, I will differently add a background next time. Great job on completing the Summer Learning Journey, do you think you'll win?
Sam